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 Post subject: Animosity Shit
PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:17 pm 
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Go poop and fall asleep
After I ate up all the collid greens

After I smoked up all the weed
After I rolled up all the weed
Dont remember but know I rolled up all the week
Dont have to say that you know its not discreet

Before all that I walked off the street
Walked out the door, after I came in and knocked off my feet

Between the time I said that y'all got to see
The missing ticket I nabbed in monopoly

Sometime after that I lost it, seen
Soon after we took off, and fleed[color=#ff0048]
From the coppers scream
Fat fucker screaming stop at me[/color]
Even louder then when I won so ominously
We could all agree then it was astonishing
The sudden good fortune that the gods would bring
To a man who felt that way, but was not the king
Until he got to be
So undeniably wrong, its free

Honestly
Got caught up in greed and my own hypocricy
Despondantly
We've been what we got to be
What we've been taught to be
Brought to be up in this monstrocity of an atrocity you call

ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY IS RAGING MORE THEN WHEN A TRAINED DOG HAS GOT TO PEE TO CANNOT GO PEE CAUSE HE'S TAUGHT NOT TO PEE BUT INSTINCTS PLEE THAT WE JUST OUGHT TO PEE
Go poop and fall asleep
After we eat up all the collid greens

After we smoke up all the weed
After we roll up all the weed
Dont remember but you know we rolled up all the week
Dont have to say that you know its not discreet

That day dude displayed such ferocity
Other dude hit the floor with velocity

Even after dude had caught the knee
In the lungs and it made him cough and weeze

No one had said that the cost was cheap
but odds were in favor then, probably

Wasn't my idea so dont talk to me
Should of asked when you wanted to do it backwards, properly

Honestly
Got caught up in greed hypocricy
Despondantly
Been what we got to be
What we've been taught to be
Brought to be up in this monstrocity of an atrocity you call

ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY IS RAGING MORE THEN WHEN A TRAINED DOG HAS GOT TO PEE TO CANNOT GO PEE CAUSE HE'S TAUGHT NOT TO PEE BUT INSTINCTS PLEE THAT WE JUST OUGHT TO PEE

Go poop and fall asleep

Rewind

All Repeat

ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY ANIMOSITY IS RAGING MORE THEN WHEN A TRAINED DOG HAS GOT TO PEE TO CANNOT GO PEE CAUSE HE'S TAUGHT NOT TO PEE BUT INSTINCTS PLEE THAT WE JUST OUGHT TO PEE GO POOP AND FALL ASLEEP

REWIND

ALL REPEAT


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:18 am 
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flowed well...you shouldnt be focusing your whole steez on rhyming words together..put those words in context..rather jus sayin them cuz they rhyme together, try adding metaphores an wordplay....hook was a lil weird in my opinion

keep droppin!


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 1:27 am 
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yeah straight up add sum metaphor in that.

Seems like all you had were end rhymes.
Not bad tho, I liked the rhymes.

keep at it


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:05 pm 
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Its a story homie, but sure, thanks for the input, I'll be considering that, because.. other than my excuses, your right.


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:35 pm 
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i chuck rocks i dunk
on the block i breeze
you suck cock you punk
an a glock i squeeze
you can block a punch
but yain blockin these
your such a rat i bet you chew on just a block of cheese
yain stoppin these
raps its facts
in fact ya wack lame knockin knees
i gotta pump
i aint
talkin bout reebok ya knees knock
snotty sleave wearin sayin "please stop"
sayin "please not the head"
prayin no no
please not the bred
im cold an freeze with ease chop ya head
its clean off
ya dead
ive showed take my clothes an clean off the red
just steam off the red
im clean off ya dead
you gotti
an ya body just leans off the bed
you full on
wacked bitch
im full on black shit
i pull on mac clips
with wool on
thats sick
you like to ride an just pull on dat dick
you a full on wack bitch
you dont say
i dont play
i get my krull on
snap wrists
ill be me
ill sea
get my gull on
crack hits


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:26 pm 
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the fuck this kid say
I'll bus ya lips jake
trusted to break
any fuck in his face if hes got somethin ta say
up in the place but no nerve to get up in ma way
I'm pumpin the weights
dumpin on fakes
comin to spray
spit thats the truth spit fast and through
and though hand to hand it surpasses you
classless dudes who dont even have a clue
I'm not mad at fools but its so sad its blue
makes me depressed
to see kids even aching in text
just creating a mess
everybody says "they be the best"
but maybe the vets deserve crazy respect
but plainly he gets insanely distressed
cause my eyes hate weakness
rhymes negate speeches
you say with designed weakness
and flaws you check my deepness
and fall you got no structure or neatness
at all this peep is a nob
rube on fence yo eatin a cob
of corn he aint freakin a song
technique isnt strong
your so weak that its wrong
beefing with shawn
is like a meeting with god
your timing and meaning is gone
and your weak lunged breathing is off
just a little zip thats needing a pop
cut em off like he was dealing with cops
its not appealing to talk
to when your feeling as hot
thats the shit to get you dealt with
who the hell quit? and let this little elf spit?
If you threw a punch I never felt shit
you needed to jump, but can help this
your to short in rhyme you rap with a helmet
im just being honest, retard, you should well..

quit.


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